I really enjoyed reading chapter 5. Jorle is a great character, I almost have some difficulty in believing that you came up with this. Then again I was pleasantly surprised at how well developed a character he was. Even though he has never appeared before I can almost imagine him in my mind's eye and that is what I love about reading. I feel that the best books must take you on a journey and I have to be able to visualize what is going on. I love the way you clearly define Jorle's role and I can compare him to some people I know that are more valuable to me alive and in my life than dead and gone. I also enjoyed the way Joshua comes to the private residence as a Class One and that his most defining character is his blond hair. I also liked the exchange at the end, while I believe Shayla would kill them if necessary, I don't think it will come to that. The romantic interlude shows that something has happened before to possibly preclude this outcome and I like that potential for foreshadowing if that was your purpose or maybe I am just reading too much into it?
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Once again I must say that I really like the way this book is shaping up. I enjoyed it when the seemingly mysterious plan begins to come together. I also like that Charlie has intentionally altered a record to make someone else notice something in order to bring that something to Shayla's attention. There were a few typos, but I did read your disclaimer. This book is just getting better and better. It has also moved up quite a bit in the rankings.
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This is getting more addictive. I like the development of the Raif plot and now it has connected the whole story into one 'piece' for this chapter. The plot thickens when the reader(me) sees that there, as always, is going to be a twist and turn and the fact that we find out that Raif was created and no one seems to know how. As well as the fact that the 'evil' Dramond is the only one with the records to his abilities and possibly his creation.
Can't wait for more. See you soon. view book

I liked both chapters, the second more than the first and I especially enjoyed the idea/concept that an AI was going to become an AL, and the fact that it was going to be modeled after her 'fiance' I believe. The shift between Raif and Shayla was a little different from most of the books I enjoy reading, but in this case it works out well. I can't wait for the next installment. See you later. view book