Hi Eric,

Have read some few chapters of your blurb, and it was quite a smooth read. The story trips fine and sounds funny, enticing and entertaining, with a skillful mastery of word usage weaved to produce a perfect blend. A brilliant and well written piece. Your description is vivid, which eased the telling of the story. Originality, authencity, and voice is seen clearly in your craft. A good one indeed!
Note: Some minor typos, and re-read can do justice to it. Goodluck.

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Dear Rebecca,

I have finally consumed and enjoyed your epic masterpiece, quite an excellent read. There's great mastery, talent and skill stuffed in here. Your craft, its authentic imaginative scenery plot, detailed descriptions, character/characterizations, word usage, sentence structures and total writercraft is breathtaking, intriguing, compelling and captivating. It is a page turner, with an intended voracious audience, and again with clear and understandable image animation to make a motion picture and Disneyland stuff. Here, you crafted a tale beyond the optical comprehension in tune with the gross matterial essence. A world class prose, even though people don't praise good work, this deserved glorious praise. Though small, but a potential bestseller. Tried my best to back your book, but... Wish you all the best.

Elijah E, Yamslaw (THE 419 CODE) view book

Dear Ariel,


Honestly, no word or statement is enough to qualify your great immaginative but esoteric writing. What an excellent and articulate piece! I love esoteric writings and terminologies, and yours have measured the best I have ever seen here. You have a word vehicle and excellent way of transporting your readers into other planes of existence. The work is one in a million, and awesome indeed. Here esoteric science, philosophy, skill and talent commingled in strong parlance to produce a thunderbolt wisdom kit. Mmmh, I swallows all the delicacies without a twist on my face, a sumptuous appeal. My title to this stuff is: "Don't stop till you get enough. Wish you all the best:-) x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x

Elijah E. Yamslaw (THE 419 CODE) view book

Dear K.C,

What a beautiful, well polished and accomplished writing you have here. Fantastic opening, good pacing and well balanced description. Plot and characterization are prove of talent and skill combined. No fault. Your detailed description is engaging and a page turner. I do like historic fiction, but this is with a difference, judging from what I read from few chapters. Your work honestly deserved notice and publication. Wish you all the best. view book

Dear Neville,

Wow once again! Have consumed the delicacy of this masterpiece. Its quite an intriguing read. Honestly, the tale is breathtaking, dramatic and entertaining. It's more Disney Pictures stuff than ordinary. It has animated some images in my head. A fantastic read to reckon.

Note: Check out this in chapter 9, if Mr. Speaks is the same as Mr. Keeper? I felt it was error. It's like your computer is having problem with small 'R'. Check from chapter 9 all the places you supposed to write "brought", you wrote "bought", and other minor typos which started from chapter 9. Make a re-read and deal with that. Wish you all the best.

Elijah E. Yamslaw (The 419 Code) view book

Dear Neville,

Have read to chapter seven of this ready-to go bestseller. What a captivating and intriguing read! This is a mellenial fantasy. Wonder why HC have taking this tale straight without all these rigours. A good one indeed. Will read the last seven tonight. All the best.

Elijah E. Yamslaw (The 419 Code) Former title, changed.
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Rachael,

Quite an excellent and interesting read. Creativity and skill in display. Carly, obssessive and inquisitive about her origin, even as all efforts seemed abortive, she persisted. An intriguing, breathtaking and gripping story. I read through few chapters, I tell you, it trips smoothly with great onioned description and word choice. You deserved a every shelf, because you've touched that part of life which affected many. Unsolved dilemma about to unfold in your tale. Wish you all the best. view book

Pam, I just read through chapter 1 to 2 once again and they sound better, and flows smoothly than before. Well written and with a very authentic romantic appeal. Your tale is breathtaking and gripping. Don't stop till you get enough is what it is. Will continued. Goodluck:) x x x view book

Dear Cynthy,

Once again I have re-read the first two chapters of your short stories, and found they have drastically improved. The stories trip smoothly and well written. Know great edits have gone into it. Check out paragraph three of the first chapter if what you intend to write is: '...or lighter then her nail colour', or '...or lighter than her nail colour.' Goodluck:-) x x x x view book

Dear,

Brilliant, intriguing and fabulous tale. Read only two chapters, very fascinating and vividly flows. You are actually a gifted and masterful writer. Your characters are visual as you paint them, with authentic and original voice. Will continue. Goodluck.

Elijah E. Yamslaw (Victims of African Wealth) view book

Dear Daberechi,

Have read only chapter 1, and discovered it is a lovely historical novel, but it needs some huge work to set it on readable state. It actually needs a re-write. And I suggest, if you can't, look for some one who will help you improve and turn your story into sparkling tale.

Suggestion: I suspect this is an African story. If it is, fine. You need to color your story with figuratives, proverbs, idiomatics, similes, metaphors, possible quotes etc. If wish to talk to me, use my email. Goodluck.

Elijah E. Yamslaw (Victims of African Wealth) view book

Dear Desiree,

Have finished the last two chapters of your book, and its quite entertaining, erotic and porn-like movie. Teens will have much demand of it. Wish you the best of my heart.

Elijah E. Yamslaw (Victims of African Wealth) view book

Dear Desiree,

Your tale really amazed my romantic flair. Well written, entertaining, captivating and gripping. The storyline is one in a million romantic thriller. Very cute, thought provoking, with great animation in my head. The dialogue is realistic, and flows smoothly, detailed descriptions with perfect scenery plots. Stopped in chapter three. Will finish it tonight.

Check out minor typos by re-reading it, create paragraphs to seperate from dialogue. Try to re-post the work again chapter by chapter. Wish you the best of my heart:-) x x x x

Elijah E. Yamslaw (Victims of African Wealth) view book

Hi Greg,

A simple and interesting start. Good storyling, full of intrigues and suspense. You've actually created a strong visual images, for your characters speak a great deal. Your detailed descriptions, plots and scenery is excellently pace, which commands the smooth flow of your story. Backed. Goodluck with it.

Elijah E. Yamslaw (Victims of African Wealth) view book

Dear Tom,

You've made my day with your thought provoking piece of work. To be honest, I have read many Christian books here, but yours is with a difference. This has animated a great divine image and thought in my heart. Your work is very illuminating, and it cut across all borders. Totally unique and soul touching. Backed. Wish you all the best.

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Hi Paul,

Fantastic read. Well written piece, A great thriller, fast paced and a great setting, a potential bestseller and would-be motion picture. I felt sorry the way Edward Buxton was sacked out of his initiated project for minor mistake. Your style and voice is very authentic, absolutely captivating. Worth my support.

Check out this typo: "Edward tip-toed out (if) office, instead of (out of)... He fixed his glance (an) a painting, instead of (on a) painting...
Goodluck. view book

An interesting read, cutely crafted, written and engaing. Your style, voice and descriptive simplicity is quite alluring and captivating. Good teen blurb. Goodluck. view book

Dea Hall,

You have just crafted an intriguing, entertaining and thought provoking story. The narration and word usage is engaging, distinctive and breathtaking. Your original voice and writing style proved skill and talent combined. The acronyms made the blurb flows as a smooth read.

Note: The places in italics, are they thoughts or narrations, if they are thoughts indicate them with italics otherwise no. Personal opinion. Goodluck with it:) x x x x

Elijah E. Yamslaw (Victims of African Wealth) view book

Dear JF,

Wow! Your tale is really another excellent, gripping and a well developed and crafted historical fiction, layered with entertaining esoteric background. Again, you've actually woven a very mysterious ancient story, very engaging, alluring and breathtaking. It has a smooth flowing detailed description, and the scenery plots provided a very dynamic atmosphere suitable for your narration and dialogue. Thujwani, Thujwun, Kullkulla and Jeppo's characters held the story strong with a well developed and exotic but simple dialogue. I tell uou the truth, you're a talented writer, there's no doubt. Your choice of words are also very excellent. Backed now. Please, check out my book if you have the chance. Wish you the best of goodluck.

Elijah E. Yamslaw (Victims of African Wealth) view book

Hi Joe,

Have read two chapters of this great work, and it's refreshing and very exquisite. Honestly, you've crafted and weaved a charming story here, with authentic characters, dialogue and original voice. Glad this is done well, and deserved to be published. Hope you'll go through mine. Goodluck.

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