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hayely smith

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Hi all i just want you all to know i am dislexic and struggle with editting and proofreading. i am useing a editor as we speak to help me. i am after info about the book story line, and the such, do you like the stories i have writtern?
Is it a story which captured you and held you, did it make you want to read one and find out what happened to the people in the book? would you buy it once all the work was done? let me know what you think.

I now have two books on here! the second Is i am nor a baby. it is the first 3 chapters and rest repeated, more will be added as soon as i have done some more!

WHAT OTHER PEOPLE THINKS OF FAIRY RING FARM.

I have just read the opening and have to say, I find this completely charming and as enchanting as the theme. You set the scene for the farm house so well and I love the talk of the lay lines and that everyone who comes to the house is happy and healthy and then the next part tells us that something is going to happen and the reader is not quite sure what yet. I loved it, wonderful.

I loved it. I've only made it to the first chapter but I can already tell that your use of description is going to carry this book far. I really enjoyed the pace and natural flow that you seems to come effortlessly to you. Well done! Many stars for you! I can't wait to read more.

brilliant narrative; descriptive and skillful...the story follow that as you continue to write your character...
on my watchlist...six stars...

Hayley, you have a great storyline. The premise is strong; the pace is steady and characterizations compelling. I really like the plot and the writing is good. You have a flair for building tension that explodes off the page, propelling the story forward.
Great storytelling

Hayley,
I was mesmerized as I read some of your descriptions. The richly detailed imagery of the prose in Fairy Ring Farm is extraordinary and the reader is easily swept away in the imaginative narrative. Six stars for a finely crafted work of fiction.

From your pitch I assumed this story was for younger generations but was quite delighted to discover it was also aimed at older adults as oppose to the traditional YA target audience. Your first chapter was amazing. The desriptions were vivid and flowed easily as you moved from one scene to the next. There wasn't much dialogue, which might put some people off but I was charmed by your use of descriptions. Your imagination is off the scale!




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Fairy Ring Farm

HAYLEY WARRINER

A fairy story for grown-ups. Where the realms of fairies and humans meet and mix, and where a human has to save them both.


Betrayed in love, Awen leaves the city and seeks solitude in a quiet Scottish valley. She buys an old farmhouse and settles there, hoping the peace and remoteness will help heal her broken heart.

But she soon finds that she is not alone. For there are fairies -- not just at the bottom of her garden, but all around. And the fairies are at war.

Awen discovers that she, a human, holds the key to saving not only the fairy realm but the human realm, too. Before too long Awen and her band of helpers are fighting not just for their lives, but battling to save both worlds.

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I have just read the opening and have to say, I find this completely charming and as enchanting as the theme.

Brilliant narrative; descriptive and skillful.

You have a great storyline. The premise is strong; the pace is steady and characterizations compelling.

The richly detailed imagery of the prose in Fairy Ring Farm is extraordinary and the reader is easily swept away.

quite delighted to discover it was also aimed at older adults as oppose to the traditional YA target audience.

 

I'm not a baby

Hayley Warriner

Ashley and her little brother have to face the bullying and abuse from their Dads new girlfriend Amy. and things just keep getting worse.


Ashley and her brother Adam struggles with growing up with a father who cares more for his girlfriend then his kids.

After Adam recives one to many beating from his dads girlfriend Amy, Ashley trys to stop her, only to be taken from her mum and much loved Hal, she is sent to a reform school, while Adam is sent into fostor care. their mum and stepdad will do everything to get them back. things are bad for Ashley and can she protect herself from the others girls and staff in the school who want to take her on,
Will Adam want to come back after his new fosterers have the abillity to give him what he wants, and made him feel so welcome and speacil
Will they return home or will Amy have her way?

PLEASE NOTE ONLY 3 CHAPTER UPLOADED. OTHERS ARE COPYS TO MAKE WORD COUNT, MORE WILL BE ADDED AS DONE THANKS

 

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Hi Hayley would you be interested in doing a read swap? Tracy

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I wrote 873 days ago

Hi velix, sorry it has taken so long to get to you. i like your storyline. maybe a little long in places but readble all the same! i found the size quite hard to read aswell as it made the chapters feel very long. but all in all i like it a lot. the story is really good and feels fresh. I have probl... view book

I wrote 873 days ago

Oh by the way if you want to answer someone on here, (and they see it) reply to them through there page as not everyone makes it back to read any reply comment. all the best hayley (again) view book

I wrote 873 days ago

Hi have finally got to you!. your book is sweet and easy reading, i have read a coule of chaptors to my 6yr and she really like it. she found your world intresting and wanted me to read more (what more can you want!) well needless to say you are now BACKED and well done this is lovely. when you h... view book

I wrote 873 days ago

Hi hun i have got round to you at last!. This is a very detailed story, filled with the darkness your book seeps into life. complex in its telling. it hits you hard with a lot of details. well done and fingers crossed for the future of the book. (ps i dont do gramma as i am dislexic and suck at it!... view book

I wrote 873 days ago

Hi Dawn, i have finally got to you, (after way to long). This is a wonderfull story, the voice you use fills the pages so very well. as you know i am dislixic so i dont do the gramma bit!. but i loved it so you are BACKED i will keep you on for as long as i can, (about a month for any book i back) ... view book

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