Hi Dan, It's good to see you're back. As you know I've always been a fan of your work and I came to this really interested. I thought you might like some feedback on my experience of it. Well, from the blurb I had no real idea of what the content would be like, but it sounded incredibly avant-... view book

An RCG review; I'm not going to follow the standard format, because I think that's useless for getting at the nub of things. I'm going to write an essay on my thoughts and impressions. I read three chapters. It was hard going for the most part and felt very convoluted. I've spent some time as ... view book

Hi, I've read the seven chapters you sent me - I'm sorry it took so long, but I've been extremely busy; but I did it. I haven't noticed many changes in the rewrite, but it is still very good and I very much enjoyed it. The humour is excellent - subtle and clever. The narrative voice is excelle... view book

Hi Steve, I reread the briefing - much better. John certainly sits into it much better - but still there is the problem with POV in places. You have John responding to what's being said with his internal - which has actually raised some concerns and adds to the tension. It's a good addition and I... view book

An RCG Review; Alexandra, Sorry for the delay and thanks for not prompting me, life has been pretty hectic. I'm afraid I just didn't feel able to read more than the first two chapters - it didn't grip me and is lacking in many areas. But that said it's quite clearly a first draft, and once you... view book