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HI CAN WE BE FRIEND?S
My Name is Jennifer am a beautiful young gi....
Thank you for backing my book! What a nice surprise to wake up to.
Joe, thank you so much for the backing, you made my day :)
Hello, I am Rachel author of the Bloodline....I just pressed the wron....
my name is miss Grace, i saw your profile here and became interested,....
It's good to see you're back. As you know I've always been a fan of your work and I came to this really interested. I thought you might like some feedback on my experience of it.
Well, from the blurb I had no real idea of what the content would be like, but it sounded incredibly avant-...
An RCG review;
I'm not going to follow the standard format, because I think that's useless for getting at the nub of things. I'm going to write an essay on my thoughts and impressions. I read three chapters.
It was hard going for the most part and felt very convoluted. I've spent some time as ...
I've read the seven chapters you sent me - I'm sorry it took so long, but I've been extremely busy; but I did it.
I haven't noticed many changes in the rewrite, but it is still very good and I very much enjoyed it. The humour is excellent - subtle and clever. The narrative voice is excelle...
I reread the briefing - much better. John certainly sits into it much better - but still there is the problem with POV in places. You have John responding to what's being said with his internal - which has actually raised some concerns and adds to the tension. It's a good addition and I...
An RCG Review;
Sorry for the delay and thanks for not prompting me, life has been pretty hectic. I'm afraid I just didn't feel able to read more than the first two chapters - it didn't grip me and is lacking in many areas. But that said it's quite clearly a first draft, and once you...