Hi Ben, This is great. If it doesn't find a publisher, there's no hope for the rest of us. Unfortunately, time prevents me from reading more than the first two chapters but I will come back to it when I can to read the rest. In the two chapter I read, I found only one grammatical error. In ... view book

Hi Dylan, This is a a very well written and unusual story. Unfortunately time prevented me from reading more than the first three chapter, though I will come back to it when I do have some time on my hands. In the short section of the story I read, I didn't find a single writing errror, not ev... view book

Hi Phil, This is quite an exciting story and, apart from a few typos is well written. I'm not sure, however, if I would have fully understood the first chapter had I not read your pitch first. Since the pitch is not part of the book you need to think about this. I generally don't like first... view book

Hi Jori, I'm not a woman, but as I owe you a review I thought I'd hav a look at this, anyway. It's serious stuff and while the writing is mostly good, there are a few typos, missing words and tense slips. I don't understand the need for a foreword and an introduction. Combine them if you li... view book

Hi Joseph, I've only had time to read the first chapter, but even from this I can see this is a great story. I did spot two minor writing errors, first a missing 'a' and secondly you use the phrase 'they were drug across the earth' 'drug' is a narcotic. The past tense of drag is dragged, so it sh... view book