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Thank you all for helping Aralen Dreams make Harper Collins' editor's desk.

The editor called Aralen Dreams "commercially viable" and a "well-written and entertaining page-turner," and made some excellent editorial suggestions, for which I am grateful.

I addressed many of the editor's suggestions (and carefully considered all of them). Thanks to the HC editor and countless members here, I am happy with the finished product, which is now available on Amazon, B&N, and Smashwords.

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Aralen Dreams

Charles Thompson

John Dillon stepped off the plane to become a better man. He didn't know love, loss, and revenge waited for him.


When John Dillon abandons an unfulfilling job on Wall Street, the Peace Corps sends him to a muddy mountain village in Panama where flesh-eating disease, homegrown dope, and a balding dog become his closest companions. Before long, however, John falls for Elena – a starry-eyed idealist with a strict Mormon upbringing and a startling past. John and Elena travel long distances in handmade canoes and rusted-out buses to share a precious night in the capital. And just as they adapt to their new life, their love is jeopardized by savage violence.

The Peace Corps celebrated its 50th anniversary this year. ABC News recently reported that 1,000 Peace Corps Volunteers have been raped or sexually assaulted in the last ten years and the Peace Corps' response has been woefully inadequate. In May 2011, the United States Congress held hearings to investigate this matter. My book addresses this issue, albeit in a novel.

Please read the articles and watch the video in the links below.

http://www.nytimes.com/2011/05/11/us/11corps.html?_r=1&hp

www.abcnews.go.com/Blotter/peace-corps-gang-rape-volunteer-jess-smochek-us/story?id=12599341

www.abc.go.com/watch/2020/SH559026/VD55106741/2020-114-scandal-inside-the-peace-corps

ARALEN DREAMS is a work of mainstream fiction inspired by personal experiences.

Complete at 71,000 words.

 

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The Father is the best book I've read on Authonomy. Rodney is a world-maker. view book

I wrote 554 days ago

I connected with this book as soon as I read the pitch, as the subject matter appeals to me. (incidentally, it looks like you need to update the pitch based on an apparent title change). I heard that Tom Wolf was writing a book about Miami, around 2005 coincidentally, but I don't know that anything ... view book

I wrote 555 days ago

As a preliminary issue, I think you can tighten up your pitch a little bit: "Claude Severin is oblivious to the dangers of his job as a male whore in [ ] 16th century France. He is oblivious to [ ] matters of his heart[,] but very aware of his poverty. A stranger [ ] offers to teach him how to re... view book

I wrote 555 days ago

I enjoyed Chapter 1. The opening paragraphs give us a nice glimpse of Jenny's character (the BMX; the shed; the generally independent spirit). I liked the detail about the socks in the slippers; I also liked the trick with the hair and the mirror and I look forward to seeing some more of Jake. Y... view book

I wrote 661 days ago

When are you going to post the review of this book? view book

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