Graham Jon Don Lench

Graham Jon Don Lench

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Writing is always something I have wanted to try, but never thought I could do (and I may, no doubt, be told it is something I definitely can't do)
I love horror and science fiction stories.
I have be on here for a while now, but have let my account wain a little while I have been re writing my story (It seems to have taken an age)
I will happily return reads, and give as honest an appraisal as I can, and expect the same back.
To all out there, good luck with your writing.

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My favorite authors are Stephen King, F Paul Wilson, Greg Bear and James Herbert. Phillip K Dick and George Orwell are also writers I didn't think I'd like, but whose work I thoroughly enjoyed.

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The Eighth Day

Graham Lench

Tonight a world dies. Billions will scream to a God that no longer exists 'Help Us.' And if He was there He'd say 'No!'


The Mexican Border 1946
The desert was still, except for the lights and the distant hum of engines. Jacob stopped running.
Maybe this wasn’t such a good idea after all. From nowhere shots rang out, peppering his back. Blood filled his mouth and he fell to the ground, not breathing, but not dying either.
He got up and ran.
A bright light engulfed him, blinding him. He looked around, only to see more lights emerge from the darkness. The night erupted with the roar of engines.
Panic engulfed him.
The last time he was here men traveled by horse or train. He knew what a locomotive engine sounded like, and this wasn’t what he was hearing.
What he heard were army jeeps and soldiers.
The planet had gone through two world wars. Men now flew. Cars replaced horses. They had weapons that could wipe out whole cities. Everything he knew was-gone.
A voice screamed. “On your knees! Hands behind your head!”
Jacob knelt, watching as the soldiers surrounded him.
A large man with stripes on his uniform pushed through. Jacob gave him a bloody grin.
“What are you smiling for?”
“Because I’ve got something to show you.”

 

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Philthy wrote 114 days ago

Hi Graham, Thanks for the kind words and backing. Made my day. I'....

Kit Masters wrote 125 days ago

Thanks very much for the comment! Please do read on! Kind ones, Ki....

Kit Masters wrote 130 days ago

Thanks for the backing, please comment if you have time! I want hars....

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I wrote 113 days ago

Hi dexter, Read the first two chapters and thoroughly enjoyed it. There are typos here and there, but we all have those in our stories, they didn't detract from the plot. Surprised it is not higher ranked. I have placed on my watchlist and will put on my shelf over the next week. Keep up the good ... view book

I wrote 114 days ago

Great opening chapter, visually excellent, bringing the reader right into Ash's (and yours) world. Have starred and added to watchlist, with the intention to place on shelf. Keep up the good work Graham Lench The Eighth Day view book

I wrote 125 days ago

Reading the first three chapters was fascinating, almost like reading my own experiences at this age. I could relate to almost everything you write. I like the style and way it is written and have backed and starred and will add comments as I read further, which I will as it pulls you in. Graham Le... view book

I wrote 131 days ago

Fantastic start. Intelligent, exciting and very tense. I can't say much more as it's ranking speaks for itself. I have backed and starred and hope it stays in the top 5 and makes it to the Ed's desk. Good luck. Graham Lench The Eighth Day view book

I wrote 131 days ago

Read the prologue and first chapter and loved it. Tense, exciting and intriguing. I love this sort of doomsday sci fi scenario, plus it is very intelligently written. This would make a great movie as I have never read anything like this. I have starred and placed on my bookshelf and hope it stays w... view book

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