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First things first: From the eight chapters I read, I have no hesitation in backing Faust's Butterfly, awarding it five stars and keeping it on my shelf for a full month. It's written to a high standard, offers much to enjoy and is more or less publishable.
So, now that's out of the way, I'll off...
I read the first two chapters. My initial concern was that Robin Hood has been done to death. However, your approach reminds me a little of “Rosencrantz and Guildenstern are Dead”, with the story focusing on peripheral characters, while the well-known protagonists of legend provide the backdrop. Wit...
My enjoyment of a book like this hinges on whether or not I get along with the main character. I liked John Musgrave and was happy to accompany him on his amorous misadventures.
You observe and write well. The pacing is on the leisurely side, which may frustrate some readers. I can imagine more ...
This is atmospheric, offers a fascinating insight into the Sicilian way of life and is very well written. Backed.
Some trivial typos and suggestions:
"barbers chair" - barber's
"the ironical Tiny" - I would leave out "ironical" - the irony is clear.
"large broadsheet" - you could probably le...
It doesn't surprise me that you write for a living - you clearly know what you are doing. It's hard to write a original thriller, and it's a crowded genre. To stand out, you need to have convincing characters, a ring of authenticity, a tense and pacey plot and tight writing, all of which are presen...