I've read the entire story, and I think that this should do quite well with its intended audience. I like that this story is told from the perspective of an Egyptian boy, and shows how his attitudes change toward the Hebrews and the Egyptian gods as the story goes on. I think it's a tough act to ... view book

Well, I'll say this much: you have talent, that's for sure. I'm not sure whether this will be the book that brings you success, because it is raw and spends a bit too much too much time dealing with the pure misery of your characters' lives to be appealing to anything more than a niche market, but y... view book

Jinger Barley and the Murkle Moon --Chirg Review I read through the first three chapters and I really enjoyed this. Your characters are wonderful, with odd quirks that make them both unique and endearing (I especially liked--and could somewhat identify with--Ms Flapp's extreme indecisiveness). Jing... view book

I really like the narrator's tone. I have a feeling kids will have fun guessing who the narrator is. Your obvious love of Africa and the creatures there shines through! I was wondering what the target age group for this book is. It seems a little long for younger children (though it'd be fine as ... view book

Speedy McCreedy--Chirg Review This is a very cute story with a serious message. I really enjoyed the 8 chapters I read. The way this story is told will be really appealing to younger kids, and there are plenty of things they can identify with: the younger sister always in the shadow of her genius ... view book