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Officer Fuzzy

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first registered 25.01.12

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about me

The only thing one really needs to know about me is that I wouldn't mind owning a little more than fifteen cats by the time I'm 30.

I write mysteries, or I try to.

I've been writing for a few years but have decided that it's time to share and get some feedback and help. All comments are appreciated.

I enjoy having my ego-stroked. The little monster gets testy if it isn't waited on, but I adore nit-picking and I love harsh reviews.

I'm open to read swaps. That is why I don't have a book uploaded. Soon, very soon.

favourite books

The Fault in Our Stars, and Paper Towns by John Green,
As I Lay Dying by William Faulkner.
The Harry Potter series by J.K. Rowling
Apathy and Other Small Victories by Paul Neilan
The Hunger Games trilogy by Suzanne Collins.
The Joe Gray series by Shirley Rousseau Murphy

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Joseph Beirce wrote 101 days ago

Hi, How are you doing? Long time no talk, etc. If you're free ....

kristylove wrote 418 days ago

Hello, my name is miss Kristy i saw your profile and have interest i....

Brian G Chambers wrote 419 days ago

Hi I don't like to pester people to read my work, but I wondered if ....

Trailer Bride wrote 499 days ago

Hi! Looking at your profile and taste in books, I think you fall i....

jack hudson wrote 499 days ago

Officer: Warm-Up Kills is a gem hidden ib a forest of 7000 book pitch....

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I wrote 713 days ago

Hey, getting to your stuff earlier than expected. I read to Chapter Three, by authonomy standards. I’m not someone who reads a lot of memoirs, about five in total, so keep that in mind. Pitch: don’t like the “yrs” . Maybe try to rearrange it so everything fit if that’s the problem, to me I doe... view book

I wrote 716 days ago

Hi,I read to chapter four and I have very little complaints. Hook: It seems too wordy to me, I would cut “adult” out of “adult daughter”. Pitch/Blurb: I think this is one of the better blurbs I've read. It seems to capture what the story is about and introduces a few key characters and makes th... view book

I wrote 718 days ago

I read to Chapter Three. This is a well written story that has great characters. The back-story is sneaked in, so it’s interesting and the pace of the book doesn’t get clogged up by what happened in the past, but there’s enough to keep the characters interesting and dimensional as well as to... view book

I wrote 733 days ago

Wow, this is a very well written, powerful piece. I think you switch seamless between the first person perspective and the second person point of view. And I think the perspective where chosen well. The "you" really made the story more in your face, kind of. I also like how it captured all the ... view book

I wrote 740 days ago

Hey, read to chapter four for now. The Title: A great title. It captures the story in three easy words and it's memorable as well. The Pitch: I don't like the "this is my first novel" bit in the hook and in the paragraph, kind of ruins the pitch for me. Maybe take it on at the very end, or put ... view book

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