Hi Jue, I read chapter 12 after I saw your forum post asking for reviews of that new chapter. This was really well written. I'd read the first few chapters months ago, and I was able to jump right into the new chapter and understand what was going on without any problem. The writing is crisp and ... view book

Hi Ray, I read the prologue and first two chapters of The Druids of Caer Gybi. Your writing is coming along nicely. I think you biggest strengths are in developing characters and giving detailed descriptions. I could see the settings, scenes, and people, and this brought out emotion and made me c... view book

Hi Cass, I've read the first five chapters of Sunflower. This is really well-written. It's simple and graceful. It reminds me of a Nicholas Spark-style novel. I can sense that Katie and Michael will find each other, and I'm looking forward to seeing how their stories will unfold. Susan/Greenl... view book

Club Agatha Critique I've read the first seven chapters of Where She Lies. I went back and reread the first chapter since it had been a while since I read it the first time. Your writing is very good--good grammar, punctuation, descriptive, few if any typos. The characterizations are also quite g... view book

Club Agatha Critique I re-read the first chapter of Chasing Shadows and I'm glad I did. I saw many changes since the first time I read it. It reads smoothly and really lets the reader experience what Chloe was experiencing. Chapter two is really good, too. Bill remembers the accident and convince... view book