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I've taken my books down from this site to concentrate more on writing and less on promotion.

Christmas Harbor, the most recent book I have finished, will soon be self-published on Amazon. If you are interested in me as a writer, then please pull up my book on Amazon and read the pitch.

tomfunderburg@gmail.com

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Software wrote 125 days ago

Hello Disciple, Hope you are well. Maybe you would like to try ou....

David Isaacson wrote 327 days ago

Hello Disciple. I’m hoping that you would permit me to call this a f....

AudreyB wrote 328 days ago

Hi, Tom—I’ve maintained a list of past and present backers (that I ho....

Isoje David wrote 353 days ago

Hi I am a young writer who is trying to become an Author. I was de....

Wanttobeawriter wrote 354 days ago

Disciple, You left my book WHO KILLED THE PRESIDENT a favorable comme....

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I wrote 436 days ago

Michael, A really good story I thought and told in places amazingly well. Two lines I personally liked were: "Memories, like knives, tore at his gut." and "Then, looking into the mirror of David's gaze, I realized I was treating him with irritation." I know it is work and not fun but I thi... view book

I wrote 436 days ago

Nicely done. Interleaving a common girl, educated but with modest means, Beth O'Leary, into events leading to the assassination of President McKinley. You went to great lengths with descriptions that solidified the connection with the 1901 time period and I believe readers will appreciate that in ... view book

I wrote 441 days ago

Scott, Slight typo I am sure. First page, 'impatients' might be the attitude of the people in your waiting room but 'Impatiens' are the name of a flower. You simply typed one too many 't's'. Such a small thing but I thought you would want to know. Looking forward to your comments on my book... view book

I wrote 494 days ago

Katie, I have read thru Chapter 5. Here are some comments. I want to read more for I can see that a powerful story is wanting to be told. A diary form has its strengths and its limitations. I would like to see this work presented in its most genuine and powerful rendering. My comments are simpl... view book

I wrote 502 days ago

Dianna, While I have some notes fresh, these are the minor things I found while reading. Use or not use them as you desire. Your Chapter 12 (13 authonomy) She nodded and blew a stray curl ... meaningful conversation would required. (would require)? Your Chapter 14 (15 authonomy) She jogged a... view book

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