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It's okay. Maybe when I've got a complete draft I can email it to you....
Thanks, Melissa. Some good observations there. Funnily enough I've be....
Hello, I can see that you have been a member for a while, I'm new and....
Hey, you. Thanks for the support.
Are you still doing those 'don'....
Nobody's in the room, so I have a hard time believing he's nodding at nothing at all. I think striking the 'and nodded' from the first sentence would make it a little stronger. I mean we know (most of us, I hope anyway) what satisfaction is, and would figure out he's probably not shaking h...
One of top three best books I've ever read on authonomy. A travesty it hasn't gotten a medal yet.
So I was going to say 'hi' in greeting but then I had an overwhelming urge to sing Ice Ice, Baby. So, I'm back with a brand new invention.
I'm not sure what the consensus is on adverbs in middle grade. (I know, I shouldn't talk about them; but hey, I wrote Doubles before I realized th...
Hey Sara, I'm going to try and get through the whole upload, but I may have to break them all up into different comments since commenting on this site is a bitch.
Third sentence here has 'road' twice in quick succession. I don't know if you can find a different way to reword, but it's ...
Well I've heard plenty of good things about your book, so I thought I'd give it a read since there is absolutely nothing on television.
I could find nothing to criticise in Ch. 1, really. I liked that the title reveal came early.
One thing (and it's not a big deal) I ...