Hello Patty, I dropped by because of the title of your story. I read the first two chapters and although I wasn't drawn into it as much as I had hoped I would, I was positively surprised to see Greek words used correctly in a manuscript :) view book

Lucette, thank you for contacting me about your book, I did take a look after reading the pitch, which I found interesting enough (so, there's a point for you right there :D) I read through the first chapter with ease and found Chloe's character engaging all things considered (especially the fact... view book

Up to chapter 4 you have offered quite a lot, actually. Glad to know it's only going to get better. The first thing I noticed was the excellent Scottish accent (or so it sounded to me), and the clear-cut characterization of Tethys and Cascos. It's the first time I read about bisexual groups of women... view book

I came by to read the chapter on Fantasy and Fables (chapter 5 on here). It's astonishing how much we have in common. In my words towards other writers who I happen to discuss matters of storytelling in other/alternative worlds: "The imaginary tale you are going to tell will be as successful as its ... view book

Oh I forgot something. I'd definitely remove the opening bits. Your call of course, but I would prefer it if they didn't confuse me when I started reading. I forgot about the opening very soon however as I followed the action, that's why I felt they didn't offer anything, so, why not remove them. view book