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Beware of Greeks bearing gifts. Was approached recently by a firm of publishers who said they wanted to publish my book. After lots of work on re-writes adding extra chapters at their behest they just dropped me like a stone with no reason given. they found my work on here so if any of you get approached by them dont get to excited.
They are:-
Evelyn Davis aquisitions editor
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LAP LAMBERT Academic Publishing GmbH & Co. KG
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66121, Saarbrücken, German

favourite books

Alan Garner
JRR Tolkien a fellow Brummie.
William Shakespeare
No apologies I actually do like Dan Brown he entertains me
David Morrell, Gerald Seymour, Ian Fleming, Zane Grey,
Ernest Hemingway, Jack London "White Fang"
Henry Williamson"Tarka the Otter"
Arthur Ransome, Rudyard Kipling, John Buchan
Jim Harrison "Legends of the Fall" is fantastic

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my books

The Dark Men of Biddulph Moor....

H.Siviter

Age group 10+. Starts during the Crusades then comes right up to present day. Themes promoting racial tolerance and strategy for dealing with bullying.


Synopsis
When Alured returns from the 3rd Crusade a knight, having been knighted for bravery at the seige of Acre by Richard Couer de Leon. He returns to his farm at Knypersley with a faithful Saracen servant called Hakim.
Unbeknown to Alfred, Hakim carries with him the Holy Grail, he has been charged by the Knights Templar to find a safe place to hide it in England.
Alured promotes Hakim to be Bailiff of Biddulph Moor and grants Hakim a plot of land still known to this day as Bailey's Hill.
Hakim hears the legend of Alderley Edge around the fire in Alured's Great Hall and decides that it would be an excellent place to hide the Grail, so he goes in search of the lost entrance to the cave.
Merlin reveals the secret of Alderley Edge to Hakim and gives him a unicorn medallion which will protect him and future generations.
The present day.
The Unicorn medallion is passed on until it comes into the possesion of Shariff an immigrant boy living in Macclesfield. He is suffering bullies at school. The bullies are defeated and the Legend of Alderley Edge is revealed to the boy.

 

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I would like to personally invite you to come read my Book. Many have....

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Death has been released upon the world, and it’s up to the three men ....

MillieC wrote 477 days ago

Hey Billy, Yes I was approached by Evelyn Davis, unfortunately beng ....

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Thanks for the support, Billy Paul

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Thank you for your kind support of Diary of a Bad Housewife. Altho....

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I wrote 1149 days ago

"Mary is quite a forgotten figure. Her reign has always been overlooked as little more than a failiure and she was always destined to be overshadowed by the two giants of Tudor history" Probably because she tried and failed to restore Catholicism and was known as Bloody Mary for a reason. poor mis... view book

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I wrote 1196 days ago

I'm not so sure that it's a good idea to give the game away in the first line. The Russian Mafia is a good subject for a thriller but it wasn't until halfway through the first chapter that I became hooked. Killing the character at the end of the chapter is an effective hook. Shelved. Bill view book

I wrote 1206 days ago

Like the descriptions and the fact that dialogue does not occupy too many lines. Dya know I hate having to read too much dialogue, actions speak louder than words. view book

I wrote 1206 days ago

I want to know more about the cloud. Chap 2 has too much irrelevant dialogue which spoils the suspense. Detailed descriptions paint a vivid picture. view book

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