Hi there, As promised, I stopped by to read this. Only had time for the first chapter - it's sweet and sad. I think most people have felt the pain of a lost love at some point. I can empathise with your MC. It can be impossible to make love to someone if your heart and mind are set on someone el... view book

Oh, I love this. The thought of travelling instantly from one location to another, and saving the world and all that wonderful swashbuckling stuff! Very exciting stuff - the ballroom scene and the fight scene are especially well done in terms of detail. xx view book

So you had 99 comments and I thought, I just have to make it 100. This is getting better every time I look at it. (Which is pretty frequently). Your opening is more dynamic now. Having read all of it, I know how important it is to get these crucial points in place at the start as they have a bearin... view book

This is a strong piece of work. It is well-structured and thought-provoking. I have read the opening chapters so far and will return to read more as time permits. You capture the mood of today's society well. I shall hold back on commenting further until I have read more, but in due course I hope to... view book

OK - you know I'm a fan of your writing, but reading this again today, it occurred to me that I haven't properly commented on Authonomy before - so here goes: As time goes by your writing and storytelling skills have become stronger. This is building beautifully and is exactly the sort of story I... view book