Hi Suzie this is a difficult story bravely told. You manage to avoid the trap of making a traumatic story seem depressing to read. Backed with pleasure. Best wishes, Kevin btw thanks for supporting Fire in the Water view book

Hi Simon YA literature is not really my thing but I really enjoyed your writing. Brought back so many memories of wanting to fit in at school... Maybe ghosts are the new vampires? Best of luck with this, backed. Hope you like Fire in the Water Kev view book

Hi Christine, this as a refreshing take on ancient fiction. I like the way you avoided the usual historical figures and events in favour of 'real' people locked in a situation. I can't find much wrong with your writing style, genuine characters coupled with a great plot hook make it compelling. I' ... view book

Hi Ray, Enjoyed reading this. I like the rising atmosphere of tension as the character's paranoia begins to take hold and the contrast with the innocent setting of the music lesson. I would say the first 2 chaps could be combined into one as there's no real dramatic separation between them. Als... view book

Hi Mel, you start off at a rattling pace with plenty of motivation supplied by the first chapter to propel the story forward. Maybe some adjectives could be weeded out to sharpen up your already taut prose style. eg 'The bang reverberated through Lorne, catapulting her from a terrifying dream,' coul... view book