Sci fi and comedy go well together. This is fun, easy to read, yet I was surprised at your use of 1st person & what seemed to be elements of romance. I'll put this aside for now & try to do a better critique later. Backed. view book

Well, this is fun! IMO your title doesn't do it justice. Typo: Ch 4, 'I have a keyboard on mine; it many ways I'm quite old fashioned' (in) Backed. view book

Fabulous concept (I was disappointed the supercollider is located in the USA -- I was hoping for a European thriller). Most stories built on a big premise like this draw the reader in with focus on a primary character/situation and advance the plot while adding back story along the way. I would hav... view book

Impressive. Is there a missing date at the start of Ch 1? Even though you've used old-style prose, I found the first chapter alone convincing and authentic. (another question: is the river Longe somewhere here on Earth, or a fantasy land?) Your cover looks rather like a prenatal scan, which is odd &... view book

Intricate world, with convincing texture & names (except: how does anyone pronounce Xochitl?!). Good to see Andebaron in there, and Loki too. My only thought was that the opening section doesn't grab (this) reader as much as it could, perhaps. Great title. Backed. view book