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written 11 days ago
cherry

Sue this is a gem and I feel should exceed your expectations. Your writing is a real skill especially when it comes to dialogue. You weave a real treat which I found easy to navigate and become drawn into. Your characters captured my imagination and left it easy for me to visualise them and bring them fully to life. Fantastic and I am sure this can and will go the whole way. Andy view book

written 11 days ago
cherry

Sorry it took such a long time to comment. This is a real gem to find here. You have woven a true art of storytelling and the way you portray the character Thompsie is magnificent to say the least. Your style at times exceeds the 'ordinary' but somehow this works and the story I think could not have been told differently. The hardships are so well portrayed and this is what makes the chapters a must win candidate. Well worth a look and highly praised. Thank you for allowing access to this. Andy view book

written 468 days ago
cherry

The Child of Heaven from what I have read so far has so much promise that I will continue reading. Each paragraph is brimming with detail which conjures immediately images of desriptive perfection. Nothing from what I have read needs altering and it is apparent the author has put everything into this.
Star rated and without any doubt a must read for me to further explore.
Andy view book

written 548 days ago
cherry

Ah poor Kate and the sad story of her daily life. Powerful and compelling stuff you offer with a descriptive style which made me stop and think on many occasions that you could be desribing the life of countless people. Certainly one I would continue with and recommend to others.
Congratulations with this and The bed Next to Mine should be given greater exposure on here.
Andy view book

written 594 days ago
cherry

Maria your style of writing is superb to say the very least, a style that appeals to me and draws me to read more of your work.
Pictures of childhood are simply conjured up through your words and almost poetic sentences which weave a magic rarely seen. In many ways I can feel a connection through my own words, albeit mine are from third party sources but the pain remains. One book I will certainly keep on my shelf until I have had time to read all that you offer.
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written 652 days ago
cherry

Marj once again your writing weaves sentence after sentence of magic. The character Shuki grows from strength to strength and continues to draw the reader ever onwards. As with the first, this offering is sure to appeal to many. You have 'soul' in your writing and this is now becoming one of my favourites on here.
Andy view book

written 659 days ago
cherry

Jane, what can I say other than a fantastic offering you have given us. Genealogy is big business today and I am sure this will expose your book to the masses.
Your style is crisp and draws along smoothly encouraging readers to take another step into the story you tell.
Chapter one reminded me so very much of my own published When Spirits Break Free, the bond of mother and son which is like nothing else.
I will, or should I say must, continue reading as you now have me hooked for more.
Fantastic - Andy view book

written 666 days ago
cherry
written 838 days ago
cherry

This is simply superb. Deeply inspiring and just drew me in from the start. Forgiveness is something I really had to find within myself as I penned our own novel "Displaced" and I will continue to use your words of wisdom as i strive to write "The Division Bell". Thank you Leelah for sharing this and I stress to all this is worth the read, either here or from the bookstore.
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written 1029 days ago
cherry

Superb and made me smile with each line. Mystery and wit entwined into one which, I am sure will appeal to many readers. Descriptive to a tee and a storyline that pulls the reader nicely along. Congratulations.
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written 1286 days ago
cherry

Hi Carole - like most northerners you have a natural talent for story telling. oupled with your excellent writing style you are sure to hit the mark with what you have here. Emma is a great character which drew me in. Intersting about the medium bit in your message. Most of the scenarios in When Spirits Break Free are based on my own experiences - best wishes - andy view book

written 1290 days ago
cherry

Hi Tony - We backed again despite doing so moths ago. You have great promise here and just wander if you have yet seeked representation? If not then you should. If yes then continue because you have that x factor - andy and vesna
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written 1290 days ago
cherry

Written with great syle and confidence. What else can i say? I am sure however you will climb the ranks because what you offer, from the snippet I have read is quite unique - andy view book

written 1313 days ago
cherry

Written with true imagination that is rare to find. You have crafted the characters to perfection and will look forward to reading more of this - well done andy and vesna view book

written 1326 days ago
cherry

beautifully written and was immediately drawn into the subject that you write so well about - andy and vesna view book

written 1343 days ago
cherry

Characters so vivid and realistic it makes it appear they are here right in my living room. Probably one of the best, if not the best of its genre on here at present. Excellent stuff - snave view book

written 1346 days ago
cherry

Hooked from the start as sonn as the smile spread across my face. Wow what a fantastic opener. A mixture of smiles and thoughts which delve deep - fantastic - snave view book

written 1358 days ago
cherry

We backed this some time ago - an excellent piece of writing which flows smoothly. Very interesting and descriptive throughout - snave view book

written 1363 days ago
cherry

Very well written and intrigueing to say the least. Sure that this will go a long way - snave view book

written 1368 days ago
cherry

Sci - Fi at its very finest. You draw the reader along as if without effort. Our humble opinion is that you have mastered your chosen genre. You have obviously spent the time researching and sure this will pay dividends for you.
Backed with utmost pleasure
andy and vesna
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