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Welcome to Authonomy.
I've been here for two years. I....
Now, your intro reads like a shopping list of "booklets" and chapters ... "booklet" gives an impression of each one being a stand alone read, as though the "booklets" are a series of connected short stories; but they are not.
At the very top of your intro, I suggest the following change: