Hi Stephanie,
I really enjoyed reading this. I find that you descibe the characters well. The opening really grabbed me and led me to want to read more. I really like the way you descibe the relationship between Jake and Amber. I found some comma errors but that can easily be fixed.You really have a unique writing voice and I find this story works very good in the first narrative.
I wish you the best on your writing journey,
Ashleigh Blanchard
Love Lies and Pregnancy view book

Hi Stephanie,
I really enjoyed reading this. I find that you descibe the characters well. The opening really grabbed me and led me to want to read more. I really like the way you descibe the relationship between Jake and Amber. I found some comma errors but that can easily be fixed.You really have a unique writing voice and I find this story works very good in the first narrative.
I wish you the best on your writing journey,
Ashleigh Blanchard
Love Lies and Pregnancy view book

I really enjoyed reading this book. The characters are well developed and easy to relate to. I was hooked from the very beginning.

Thanks
Ashleigh Blanchard
Love lies and pregnancy view book

I really enjoyed reading this book. The characters are well developed and easy to relate to. I was hooked from the very beginning.

Thanks
Ashleigh Blanchard
Love lies and pregnancy view book

I really enjoyed reading your book. The writing style was a bit unusual but it had me on the edge of my seat.
Thanks,
Ashleigh Blanchard
Love Lies and Pregnancy view book

This was a great read. Definitly a page turner. So far this has been my favorite book on the site. I have found no mistakes and the dialogue flowed At some points I truelly felt like I was feeling the emotions. I can't wait to read more.
Thanks,
Ashleigh Blanchard- Love Lies and pregnancy view book

I really enjoyed reading your book. I really like the way you pace the book for a young audiance. I find it is well written and without errors. I look forward to reading more.
Best wishes,
Ashleigh Blanchard view book