Cheri, just started reading. Liking it so far and will continue to read. I must remark, however, on a certain imprecision that makes its way into the prose on occasion. For example, second paragraph, "The relatively small space..." Relative to what? I don't see the word relatively adding anyt... view book

R Moore. I get a sense of a very strong and unusual personality in your work. There is a really anarchic sensibility coming from these pages. That said, though, I think you should break these pages up into paragraphs; it would make it easier to read. There also seems to me that you could disting... view book

Leelah. What a strange, fascinating, and terrifying book you've produced. I very much respect it, in the sense that I respect all things that were produced out of a deep need and inner necessity. It is totally unlike anything I have ever encountered before, a truly haunting experience. What i li... view book

I love the title. As I was reading I envisioned the story being accompanied by large and colorful drawings, like the books my school librarian used to read to my class in first grade. This could be one of those books. view book