Amy, Jessie and Nick are adorable. I love their enthusiasm and their search for adventure (which is something kids today are often lacking =) I like seeing the story through their eyes. I've read through chapter five so far and I like where its heading. I like the buildup of what Granddad may or ... view book

NIce, dark beginning. The next three chapters are great as well. I read the first four chapters and I really like what I'm reading so far. Your writing is strong and the descriptions and dialogue are well done. Nothing is overly lengthy or distracting and the dialogue is right to the point and b... view book

I think I can just get it out first and say you write fantastically! I am very impressed with your ability to tell a story with such beautiful detail and yet keep the chapters short, succint, and shocking. There is no lengthy, drawn-out happenings that can distract, and that is a hard thing to acc... view book

Beautifully written. I love the way you describe Galah and how her interactions are so believable for a young, troubled girl. The little nuances she has makes her real to the reader and you do this well. I also love how we hear her thoughts that she is too scared to share with others and her unique... view book

Very interesting beginning. I like the lead-up and I like the main character right away. I think you also give beautiful descriptions and have a unique writing style that paints a nice picture. Only a few things I noticed: It was a bit distracting to not get Livia's name until the fifth or sixth... view book