Hi Dean This is not really my genre so it's quite hard to comment - it's not the kind of book I would buy to read. I think your writing is good and the concept is great and I would have thought very marketable with all the hype around The Hunger Games etc etc. To me, it reads almost more like a ... view book

Hi Violet, I'm enjoying what I've read of this so far - really great story, that will appeal to a wide market. I had one idea - that you could actually swap chapter 1 and 2 around? I feel that the idea that the pilot might bomb his wife is much more potent once we have met her. Just an opinion! ... view book

I've only read one chapter of this and I'm intrigued. I will be back for more and will leave detailed comments then. Have a look at mine in the meantime if you can: http://www.authonomy.com/books/42610/the-dog-walker-s-guide-to-obedience-training-/ It's not really about dogs! Juno view book

I've only read one chapter, but I'm loving it already. The characters are real and instantly believable. The sense of place is great. I don't think you can do too much in terms of describing the scenes etc - to anyone who's never been to Pakistan, it is fascinating! Really good and I'll be back ... view book

An interesting concept, Su Dan, and when I get the chance I will be back to read more! Juno view book