An interesting pitch - the Houseman quote is great and perfectly matched to the text. I doubt it will pull in vast numbers of readers though, as it deals heavily in thematic analysis and doesn't give away much of the plot. That may not matter though, as fans of dystopias will recognise what you're ... view book

I really enjoyed reading this - at least what there is of it posted. Cate is a great character and the people of Sheriil's Mound make a wonderful supporting cast. The dialogue carries the weight of the story and it's really well done. Theo the prat's share of it shows a nice personality split betwee... view book

A well written book with a powerful message interestingly presented. The messenger with his notes is an effective way to offer what amount to bullets, or recaps of the information presented. Your pitches need quite a bit of work though, as they don't show the promise or the interest of the book. The... view book

Dear L.G. Lots of great comments about your lovely way with words, all true, and your clever play with literary styles, also true, so I won't add to them. I'll just complain about your profile picture. Your breeches are definitely supposed to be lavender. view book

I enjoyed this very much but I wondered about the length of it, and the market for something so short. One of your commenters points out the clipped presentation of parts of the story, and I can see why you wouldn't want to spend time on the journey home but perhaps you could fill in more of Hakim'... view book