Hi Fiona, A return read, and a YARG review. I tend to comment as I read to give a fair critique. Take whatever rings true to you and ignore the rest. My opinion is only one in the sea of many. I only hope you find some of it useful. I like the title and cover image. Pitches: I like the first l... view book

Hi there, Finally made it to read on from chapter five. Here are my thoughts as I read. Chapter 5 I'd put this in speech marks, it pulled me up and I had to re-read... mocking, "Stratight Sticky want to run... Otherwise, great chapter. I still love the harshness of the narrative, there is no sa... view book

Hi there, A YARG review.I tend to comment as I read, take whatever rings true and ignore the rest. My opinion is only one in the sea of many. I only hope you find it useful in some way. Nice cover image. I like the short and long pitch, very intriguing. Chapter one I like the imagery in ... view book

Hey Jimmy, Finally got back to doing some reviewing today. And yours is first on my list to return to. Chapter 2 Lovely descriptive first couple of paragraphs, gives the reader a great image and atmoshpere to the surroundings, puting us right in the scene. I like this line...should pound some... view book

Hi there, Here for a YARG and a swap read. I comment as I read, to give a fair and honest critique, my opinion is only one in the sea of many, so take what ever you find helpful or what rings true. I like the title and both pitches. Especially the short pitch. I only wondered about the last sent... view book