Amy, After coming back and reading this a few more times, I thought I'd add a more lengthy comment. I don’t know if you’re still interesting in feedback from Authonomy, but I wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed reading these three chapters. I hope you come back and add more. It is a compell... view book

I don't see this as a children's book at all, but more of a fictional memoir. I love the voice. view book

I read a little bit of this because your blurb interested me. The beginning of chapter two really caught my attention. I wonder if starting there would give the reader a chance to know, and care, about the characters a little more? As I said, the story sounds interesting, something I would like to r... view book

Great characters. Clever concept. view book

Best of luck with this. view book