This is pretty good! Sci-Fi is an easy genre in which people retreat into cliche, but you do a decent job of avoiding that pitfall. I think you accomplish this in part because in this book humanity is at the very dawn of what people think of as the meat & potatos of sci-fi (Faster than light trav... view book

Right now you need to focus primarily on issues of grammar and punctuation. I'm noticing a lot of sentences which need restructuring and suffering from tense problems. Examples: Paragraph 1: "incristed" should be "encrusted." Paragraph 2: TWICE in this paragraph you have "Sophie sister" when it ... view book

Having experience in leadership and having read my fair share of leadership material I would say this is pretty good. You raise some interesting points (Inspiration vs. Problem solving I felt was a good one). The material you have is fairly sound, so I don't have much in the way of critique there. ... view book

Diana, Just read a portion of the book and I like it! It's quite different from other things on here I've read. It has a good sort of down to earth, localized feel yet the way it references larger events (WWII) connects it to larger realities. The language isn't over complicated, which is righ... view book

Okay, let's start with the stuff that I like. 1.) It's timely. Here's a book that speaks about what is happening right now in a part of the world most of us will never end up visiting. I think there's a niche for this. 2.) It's written on a popular level. It's not academic, it's not didactic, ... view book