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Empty space on your shelf looks just right for Tybalt & Theo!
This is wonderful. For the first few thousand words I thought I was in the mind of an autistic child, curiously. I feel compelled to read the rest of it. One niggle - I would drop the presentiment / foreshadowing of murder(ing) until slightly later. The main POV is the child, so it feels (... view book
Heh! Wouldn't we all like Chapter 1 letter like that ;-) One the bookshelf for a good read when I have some time! view book
I really liked this! Lots of interesting concepts etc. I think the upload may have mangled some of your formatting however. It really needs a bit more spacing and more paragraphs to read easier. Really good use of dialogue, often lacking around here! Any chance you will put the whole bo... view book
Nice pitch. view book
Sob ! Damn, where is that crack pipe :-P I really hope that agent says yes and that you get published. I can already see a film. I suspect Simon Pegg might be in there! I am starting to get a feel for this site ( and 30 + emails telling me I am evil and that I have no right to be critical. And... view book