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Many thanks to those who supported Deshay of the Woods on its way to the Editor's Desk! I have a sequel in the works, but I'm tabling that to work on another novel project called Leech (the first five chapters are viewable here on Authonomy if you're interested).

The covers for Leech and Deshay of the Woods were created by yours truly. If you're needing help with a temporary Autho cover, let me know.

Agents and publishers interested in discussing my book can contact me at: phil_the_love@yahoo.com.

favourite books

Stephen King's Dark Tower series; J.K. Rowling's Harry Potter series; Ray Bradbury's complete short stories; Charlotte Bronte's Jane Eyre; The Complete Works of William Shakespeare; Lois Lowry's The Giver; The Chronicles of Narnia series

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Leech

Phil Partington

A mysterious stone falls from the sky and a voice shares secret technologies enabling the city to thrive. But such power doesn't come without cost.


Plague and nuclear war have emaciated the earth leaving the planet as a wasteland called the Unlivable Space. A dark stone falls from the sky and speaks only to the man who finds it, sharing technological secrets unknown to the world—secrets which enable his city to thrive amidst the chaos. Among the new creations is a machine which grants The Elect—the society’s privileged class—special powers, as well as the ability to breed a mutant class to serve him and his followers.

But a clan of Muties living in the sewers are planning a rebellion and have created a special device of their own, called Leech, which enables them to harness temporarily the power of The Elect. Twin Muties, Ash and Milt, are drawn into the conflict when Ash is wrongfully accused of murder and sentenced to death.

 

Deshay of the Woods

Phil Partington

Between darkness and light, love comes in many shades, but when spectral powers intervene, the lines between true love and lust become blurred.


Something preys on the men of Lott's Vale, appearing as the woman each one finds most beautiful and using its carnal nature to seduce and ensnare them. Matthew struggles to distinguish the real from the illusion as he becomes its latest victim.

Alexandra returns to the town after eight years away in hopes of seeing Matthew, the boy she never stopped loving. She arrives during a time of celebration and festivities, but finds herself in a battle to save him from the Witch of the woods.

Deshay of the Woods is a gut-wrenching, action-packed fairytale for young adults, featuring a world where magic has been banished by the King, colossal monsters attack helpless towns and shape-shifting demons stalk the land. It is the first book of The Demon's Pendant series.

(Cover created by Phil Partington)

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Thanks for everyone's support of Deshay of the Woods, and thanks to Harper Collins for their extremely insightful and constructive review. I've taken their feedback to heart and have drastically rewritten the novel. For further updates/explanation and to read the HC review in full, check out the forum: http://authonomy.com/forums/threads/109625/hc-review-of-deshay-of-the-woods/

 

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David Southam wrote 3 days ago

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David Southam wrote 17 days ago

Getting closer, yet no where near finishing! I aim to have the first ....

David Southam wrote 18 days ago

That's great. Congrats on the baby, for when it arrives! Let me....

David Southam wrote 19 days ago

Hi It goes good. Had a long break from writing, regrettably, but h....

Brian G Chambers wrote 20 days ago

Hi Phil I thought since it is my birthday month (May) I would contac....

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I wrote 60 days ago

Hi Julie, Had a chance to check out the first chapter of your novel. Here are my findings. They are of course my humblest opinions, so take them for whatever they’re worth. “Her husband Jock was slouched…” Jock needs commas around it. “off out tonight” is this how she talks or is it a typo? Se... view book

I wrote 62 days ago

Hi MC, Back for the first 2-4 chapters or so per your request. As usual, here are my thoughts but are merely opinions, so take them for whatever they’re worth and feel free to disregard what you disagree with. I certainly don’t know it all am reminded of that on a daily basis. Chapter 1 I still... view book

I wrote 68 days ago

Hi MC, I’m here to check out your book. If you get the chance (unless you have already and I’m forgetting), please take a gander at my novel-in-progress called Leech. I’d love to know your thoughts on it. Below are my findings and observations. They are of course my humblest opinions, so please ta... view book

I wrote 75 days ago

Hi Brian, Here for our read swap. Pitches look great. A couple comma things to note (I know commas aren’t a big deal, but as you’re having it reviewed for publication, I figured you’d like to know). - No comma needed after “gets killed” - You need a comma after “millions of hits” as it ends ... view book

I wrote 83 days ago

Hey Ashley, I’d been meaning to check this out and you popping up reminded me. Great start! Truly! I do have some observations and suggestions, and as usual they’re just my humblest opinions so take them for whatever they’re worth. Additionally, I throw out a few examples amid the suggestions, but... view book

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