Hi Richard, Here at last my crit of Aracelis, this is obviously only my opinion so use or discard as you see fit. I love the concept, that the Time Weavers can give you ideas while you sleep. Prologue: This was a good introduction to the idea of Aracelis inducing dreams and planting thoughts whi... view book

Hi Sam, Here are my thoughts on The Binding please use or ignore as you see fit. Your pitch had me interested straight away, it promises the sort of story i like to read and after having read the 5 chapters you’ve uploaded i wasn’t disappointed. Eliza comes across as a strong character who’... view book

Hi Sandie, As promised weeks ago here is my critique of The Crown of Crysaldor. Please feel free to discount anything you don't like or don't agree with as these are only my opinions. Chapter 1 I felt using the 'ing' words here took the edge of what was a dramatic start perhaps instead of clangin... view book

Fools of a Broken Land is an interesting read, it is clearly written and easily transports you into the world of it's characters. there are alot of characters to get to know which i found a little confusing at first, but they are bought to life easily without any long winded descriptions. A couple ... view book

I have read three chapters so far and i'm loving it, Amalia is very real and likeable and the story hooks you in straight away. All my children lined their teddies up around their beds just like Amalia and one still does despite being a teenager now. I'm looking forward to reading more, well done an... view book