Hi Anjelique. I’ve only read a chapter and a half, because my notes started to get repetetive. Here they are: First of all, the table of contents is entirely unnecessary on Authonomy. It just means that the reader has to go down and click through to the next chapter instead of getting to the stor... view book

SF42 Hi Scott I've only read the first 3 chapters, but I've made quite a few notes, and they'll start being repetative soon so I didn't go any further (also I have to get back to editing!). I like what I've read, and I like that it gives the feel of taking place in just a small part of a big g... view book

SF42 Hi Ellie I like what I've read. There's very little 'wrong' with it, but here are the few things I picked up: - The sentence starting 'Shattered windows...', I think would read better without 'precarious' at the end. It just reads as slightly too long - perhaps too much along with 'sha... view book

SF42 Hi Ted I've read six chapters, and can find very little to say about it. My notes: I don't like that comma in the second line - it seems to weak to break up the embalming fluid and the cold body. Perhaps a semicolon? I'm not the best at using them though, so I'm not sure. I think th... view book

Hi Derek As asked (a long time ago) I've read 3 chapters. My notes, such as they are: 'now fully wakeful and alert' - wakeful doesn't sound right to me. I looked it up and one of it's definitions is 'Alert and vigilant' - which would make the alert part of your sentence redundant. Perhaps just... view book