Two chapters in and I have such a soft spot for Emily. This really struck a chord with me, as I've often sat in church wondering why I'm there, what's true and what's not, and what it means to me. The rituals are comforting but the message often misses the mark. I've gotten more from attending Al-... view book

Read the first chapter, and have no real criticism except to lose the exclamation points. There are too many, and they lose their impact. There are other ways to convey the speaker's enthusiasm. Liked the characters and the pace, and felt you provided enough but not too much information on dre... view book

That's it - I'm off sugar! And I'm pretty sure I have the dehydration headache right now. I think your book strikes the right tone - authoritative, practical, and alarming. It's a real testament to the survival instinct of the human body that we can exist, though sub-optimally, on the junk we f... view book

The pitch is very promising, and Chapter One does not disappoint. It's a great start - pulls the reader in with mystery, jealousy, and the portent of disaster. Will be back to read more. Best of luck with this. Vickie (Barely a Trace) view book

Wow - I was hesitant at first, not my usual genre, but the characters held me hostage through chapt 10, when I had to stop to cook dinner. Great pace, lots of action, a very interesting alternate universe which is not as 'fantasy-ish' as most I've read, so I was able to stay plugged in the whole wa... view book