Nicodemus OtherThis is a very character-centric story, which is by no means a criticism. I think it works well for this book since it is all about an old man speaking back on his life. The prologue gives a sort of insight to which characters are closest to Nick's heart.The following chapters are brilliantly introspective. Very poetical and sometimes have a philosophical tone about them. I'm looking forward to more. I want to know about what happens to him now he's taken LSD.I didn't notice any mistakes or errors along the line. If there are some I wouldn't feel best equipped to advising you on them anyhow. I'm just a reader, not a writer.Best of luck. Highly starred.