Amanda, This is written so well. It is clear and concise on what we can do to battle Satan in our lives and families. I think some of your statements are very powerful. When you said that ‘Satan’s goal is to persuade us to rebel against God, because he knows when our hearts are obedient to God, ... view book

Lucy, I finished your uploaded chapters. What a well-written story with such a great feel to it. You’re very talented at creating quite a unique piece of work here. I love Frank, who seems to be finding himself for the very first time in this place. The house behind the Bed and Breakfast seem... view book

There was a very relaxed, vacation-like mood throughout chapters three and four. The scenic descriptions and the adventures Frank went on gave a wonderful cottage-on-the lake feeling. I felt the warm breezes and could picture the scenes so well. I do love descriptive stories and it felt like this... view book

Lucy, This pulls you into the story right away. Your writing is very smooth. I had the feeling of Frank being very alone in the beginning. The mood of the story was very much like I would expect, a quiet house with very little movement, but a lot of thought. Frank has this huge sum of money and... view book

Scott, I was going to tell you to skip the preface you wrote, but I see you took it out. I like what you have better now. After reading your uploaded chapter, I look at the story and think you have an interesting plot going on, yet there is a lot of telling here, in places where it might come out... view book