Hi Jim, As a fellow fantasy fan I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed your opening chapter. It revealed a world full of mystery and fleshed out characters. I can see why this ms has such a high rating. I shall add it to my wishlist and work my way through it. Good work :) Charlie view book

Hi Ted, I am a huge fantasy fan so felt more than comfortable reading this. I think you write very well and it is obvious that you have spent of lot of time building this world of yours and it shows in your writing. Highly starred. Once thing which I could not help but notice is that I have a ... view book

Hey Janet, What an amazing pitch, if my own was even half as good and attention grabbing I would be overjoyed. Instantly I imagine a bleak and gritty western in the style of the film Unforgiven and that was enough to make me want to read it. The first chapter is brilliant and had me hooked ri... view book

Hey Cara, My this is good. I have read the prologue and first chapter so far but time willing I will give the rest a read too and let you know what I think. I can instantly tell that you have put a lot of work and thought into this world you have created (which you need to if you plan to write 9 ... view book

Hey Scott, I was really impressed by your MS. I dont read much sci-fi but this was really good. Reminded me slightly of Philip K. Dick's work although in your own style which was dark yet with a touch of comedy which I liked. The first two paragraphs or so form a prologue which helped catch my at... view book