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Excellent stuff, chilling and gripping. Keeping it on my shelf for the full read.
Deserves to make it to the desk, good luck.
After the opening paragraph I was full of praise. After the 2nd I was going to start nit picking. And again with the 3rd. And the 4th.
Then it clicked. Brilliant!
By the time I got halfway through the first chapter I was laughing (Scrooge's gaze fell on the pavement...) and decided that this ...
You've set your stall out early with this one. The ghost partner is a popular theme and has been done before but doing it with a female gumshoe and a famous cowboy? Nice.
The only minor tweak I can suggest is the mention of the 'expensive suite' in the hotel. I would take it out of the descriptio...
A story of classic cars and looking after someone? I'm in.
Only read 2 chapters so far but I'm keeping this on the shelf because it looks like it's going to be great. It reminds me of reading 'Dad' (William Wharton) from many years ago.
There are a couple of typos but nothing that won't get ...
Hi James, I backed this a few days ago and thought you might like my comments.
Love it! I notice Douglas Adams name in your bio and the influence is clear and the connection is worthy of him.
The only glitch I spotted is in Ch3, 'Thelopius looked supervisors back as it walked away. '