This is good because it's real, whilst it is fiction I see from your profile that you have lived some of this. Well written and entertaining. I will read more. view book
I have read some of this before but just had another look, it's well written and I love your memories of Yorkshire. I will read on. Thanks for backing mine. view book
I can relate to a lot of this, similar experiences to my own here in Italy. view book
Really quite amazing for someone so young to be able to write like this. It is brilliant. You deserve to be published. Well done, both on the writing and on the recovery. view book
Enjoying this as I live in the Apennine mountains. One nit-pick, in your pitch it should read 'who lived in Italy' rather than 'that lived in Italy. view book
I think I've seen this before but read some again this morning, and shelved it. Its a great read. view book
Interesting childhood. I read all thats posted. I was hoping to read about your work as an adult in the police. Does that come later in the book? view book
Oh this is excellent. Well written with lots going on - I want more! view book
fab! Absolutely great. Being from Yorkshire I really get the humour and would buy this book now if I could. view book
Well done, pity more men don't think like this. view book
Read all thats posted, want more. A really good read. only mistake that jumped out was end of ch4 think it should read clothes and not closed. view book
A good first chapter. Don't know whether it's the subject matter or the fact that this is your second book, but I feel your writing is stronger and more confident in this than in 'O & E' let me know when you post more so I can read on. view book
Brill, I like the dirty ones best! view book
The second one is hillarious. will read more later. view book
Just started reading this and coudn't stop. Keep loading the chapters! view book
Good first chapter, will read more later. view book
Excellent first chapter, 'Darren' probably made the whole thing more entertaining. It just goes to show true life stories are the best. view book
Can I suggest that you put in Frankie's age - he has a birthday party and I found myself trying to guess, is he 3 or perhaps 4? Maybe it's just me but I like details. view book
Brilliant, love this. Cadburys chocolate the solver of all problems. Going to read more of this. view book
It was going well until the last paragraph (ch 1) You mentioned more than once how cold it is and this works as it's set in Yorkshire but then you start the last paragraph- With the heat of the sun and strong rays etc. Would the sun be that strong at that time of day in Spring? This bit may need re-wording so you don't go from one extreme to another. view book