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J.M Hagan

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"Me fail English? That's unpossible!"
-- Ralph Wiggum

I am BATMAN......no, not really. But i could be, if i was a billionaire.
My name's Mark. I'm from Belfast, and I love to write. It's what I do, and I don't really like doing much else, except going out, lifting weights and playing my xbox!

I want nitpickers to spot the glaring mistakes in my MS. I'm sure I've made many, as we all do. Any comments are welcome, harsh or not.

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Legends of Verra The Wanderer

Mark Hagan

War is a device of boundless horror. It has turned Ranku from a sweet boy, to a man of intemperate disposition, capable of bitter violence.


The conflict between the Royal Army of Phobex and the minions of Lasgorth Nomany left all of the land a desolate wasteland. Ten years on, and still, there is no-one in power. The country is lawless. There are no longer any rules. It is a time when the strong survive, while the weak suffer at the hands of the ruthless.

Ranku Galloway, a young man who has lived through three years of war, is travelling the wasteland with his comrade, Zabu, an aging veteran who is in search of the family he left behind. Armed with swords and stout hearts, they encounter two women in peril.
As he unwittingly becomes the sole protector of the land's last, best hope for peace, Ranku must not only protect the women from the demented forces which seek to slaughter them, but also from an implacable enemy of his past.

But this is only the beginning of a plot, conceived by three cunning demons, which will see the entire world left in ruins.



MS complete 118,000 words.
© Copyright 2012

 

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Dear Mark, I hope you are well? I must admit that I feel embarassed t....

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I wrote 241 days ago

the quote is from me. It's something Ranku writes in the future. I thought it was a good way to begin the story because it tells of his strong feelings and also his bitter loneliness. view book

I wrote 245 days ago

Hiya Aubree, Great start to the story. Your voice is splendid, funny and realistic at once. I've had nights like that before, so i could relate to all the thoughts racing through her head, even though i'm a guy. The only thing that bothered me was where you said about the scab on her lip? surely ... view book

I wrote 246 days ago

Sara, I've read the first chapter of finger bones, which is enjoyable and quite different from most other stories on this site. While reading i was sort of reminded of "beetlejuice" both stories have sort of the same tone. I get the feeling that finger bones could become an iconic character. I wi... view book

I wrote 246 days ago

Claire, This is not my usual read, but that's what's good about authonomy -- we're challenged to dip outside of our genres'. I read the first chapter and my attention was held throughout by your story which is brought to life with believable characters and some good writing. Your readership would... view book

I wrote 246 days ago

Dani, Our stories have a similar opening with our protagonists being deprived of their vision. While my story begins with a disturbing tone, yours strives to lighten the mood despite the darkness and dire situation, and i think it works well. This is genuinely funny because of your writing style.... view book

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