I LOVE your pitch. It captured my attention full force. I will surely read your book, and if its as good as your pitch, i'll probably back it.
Alexandra
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Hi shelby, sorry it took me so long to get back to you. but i read your book and it kept my attention all the way. I love the way how you wrote the beginning of your book. It was beautifully written! and your main character is very 3D. Great Job! view book

i really enjoyed this story, it's for real with lovable characters and a good teen atmosphere. I really liked Isaac but found his situation quite sad. I cant wait to find out more! I hope you publish view book

Wow, honestly, you have an amazing story for a fantasy. Loved it through and through and cant wait to read more! Five stars! view book

This is the first book that I read on this site. But at first I wasn't sure if I should read your book or not, Nathan, because every time I found myself reading Roman fiction about the first church and all that, I found myself really disappointed!
But I have to say that this book kept me at the edge of my seat, and even I felt myself gasping for breath! Great work!
I love novels that battle over the heart of the individual, and lead to the message of Jesus. Those are always the best. Antonious' heartfelt struggle against his own soul led me to think about my own struggles and battles that I have to face, and really reminded me at the end that no matter what we did, Jesus' sacrifice covers it all.
This action-packed story is truly a winner. I do think it does need editing throughout the book. But I in my opinion, I think Chapter One could use some heightening on depth for a little suspense. Also as an introduction for Chapter One, considering it goes back in time from the Prologue, I think you should add something like telling how many years or so earlier. Cause at first I got confused.
Anyways it is a great story, and I wish you the best of luck.
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