Maretha This is a good read for children, I read the first few chapters and I did get the feeling that someone is sitting me down, reading to me. Your language is clear and your tone is pamering. The narrative is quite interesting as well, even unique, coming from an animal. I think others have c... view book

Kate, Honestly, your book is a good read. It flows very well and I like your choice of words. The writing is clean and the plot is interesting. I like Marielle and the character you've built in her. The tragedy she and her brother are going through pulls on the reader's emotion while the new ... view book

Jack, I really like your book. I like the idea of flipping back and forth in time. The story is very interesting and the writing is lustrous. There is a suspenseful plot building. I particularly like how you transitioned into chapter 2 to speak of Francisco. More needs to be read but so far I ... view book

Julia, I read five chapters of your book and I found it quite interesting. There is good suspense building up and I really want to know what happens next. There is a constant flow to your writing - uninterrupted. Only one thing i'll say, and it is just a thought - would it help the plot if you... view book

T. Donna What I love about your book is that from the very get go, it was gripping. I can feel a passion behind the words as if the story is personal, yet it has a fictional characteristic to it. The language is eloquent. I love your choice of words and the way you describe your surroundings. Wh... view book