Your description doesn't give much away, so I wasn't sure what to expect, but I must say, thre three chapters I have read so far have been rather enjoyable. I like that there is a visual form to your writing. I love how you describe your setting and characters. It definitely sets the mood well. Magg... view book

This was an interesting read. While I did like the banter between Luke and Eva, as the chemistry between them was evident, I didn't understand the animosity between them. It didn't seem as though there was any concrete reason for their hatred towards each other. Perhaps that will be explained later ... view book

I've read the first four chapters, and so far I'm enjoying it. It's quick paced, which I like and the interaction between the characters is believable. I like Damian's personality. I haven't connected to Emma just yet, but she is likable. I found the intrusion of Damian's thoughts in the first chapt... view book

This is a very well written piece. The sentence structure is great and flowed with ease. I've read three chapters and was very impressed with the characterisation. An enjoyable read so far. Alecia :) view book

A good start to a promising book. I love a good mystery and the end of chapter two certainly left me hungry for more. It needs a little tightening in places, but for the most part, it is well written. I'm liking it, so far. The characters are likeable and Alex sounds HOTT. Looking forward to find... view book