Club Nora Critique I really enjoyed this first time round and as a former expat who moved abroad with children I can really feel for Pam. You set the scene well with enough backstory for the reader to get to know her and her family. Her anxiety at the move and her annoy annoyance at not being c... view book

This is a great premise for a story. At the beginning, you introduce Gabriella who is a sensible, no-nonsense sort of girl and use short, sharp sentences which go well with the description of her character but then you continue to use them as the story goes on and at times it felt a bit abrupt. It a... view book

Club Nora Critique It's good to come back to Harbinger's Kiss, which I first read months ago. Pitch is good and shows this is more than just a romance. Your style is very easy to read and the plot moves along at a good pace to keep the reader interested. Bethany seems very angry with August and m... view book

Club Nora Critique Pitch - I think you meant possesions rather than positions This is an intriguing story and you have created some interesting characters.I think you need to clarify the bit with the letter as to me it doesn't quite work as it is. Her grandmother has written her a letter and ... view book

Club Nora Critique This is a great first chapter. Well written, good pace and well rounded characters. There's not really much I can suggest to improve this and shall look forward to coming back and reading on soon. Sorry this is such a short review but you'd done a great job! Melanie La V... view book