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benjacoto

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I'm interested in weaponry, martial arts, historical warfare and rugby. Currently studding Classics, English Lit and Sociology at 6th form. Loved fantasy from an early age and despite being dyslexic I would love to have a published novel. I spend most of my free time either on my computer, writing or training, along with the martial arts y I study I have taught myself wushu (chain whip and such) and a few knife fighting techniques, almost all the fighting moves in my book have been tried by me and my test dummies (sorry friends...)

favourite books

The Lord of the Ring trilogy, the Silmarilion, the Night Angel trilogy and various books by Conn Iggulden. Also the Song of Ice and Fire series.

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my books

The Gifted War

B.T.B Anderson

Oliviana has all four of the supernatural Gifts, yet power means nothing if everyone around you has a hidden motive.


Those born with one of the four Gifts are treated as social outcasts, yet they walk like Gods among mortals on the streets on London, Paris and Moscow. The Gifts grant power, but also a curse; religious zealots hunt those born into the powers and many die before their years. On top of the social conflict created by the Gifts arrival almost a century ago the world has become a volatile cauldron, ready to bubble over into war at any moment. The west has unified, Europe and America now rally under the same banner while on the opposite side of the world Russia, China and India ready their countries for a world war. Between the two super powers Britain has imperial ambitions once more; holding land in Africa for the first time in two centuries yet that has brought them to the attention of the closed bordered Muslim states where to be born with a Gift is to be put to death. Amidst the political upheaval and a darker plot of racial supremacy Oliviana must chose her friends carefully and her enemies even more so, because when one has a Gift one invites death, and she has all four.

 

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kristylove wrote 83 days ago

Hello, my name is miss Kristy i saw your profile and have interest i....

Daniel6394 wrote 90 days ago

benjacoto: I am still very much hoping for a return read. Best Wish....

jenniferzinger wrote 98 days ago

Hello how are you doing today?? hope all is ok with you,it's my ple....

chevalier94 wrote 125 days ago

Hey there, My book sits (and just sits!) and not progressing. Help m....

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Hello Benjacoto, Happy New Year. Hope you are well. Maybe you ....

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I wrote 160 days ago

CWOG review Nice imagery in the opening. Was ‘Grammy’ supposed to mean ‘Granny’? Ah, no its repeated; my bad! :L There is a lovely setting a feeling running through the whole first chapter, and I love the talking to the reader thing going on in the last few paragraphs. The description of creepi... view book

I wrote 160 days ago

Okay, so you wanted a bit of advice regarding the equipment and tactics of that era, I’ll start with equipment of the Huscarl (housecarl) as they are the first warriors we meet in your book. Armour; The most common armour of the period was the mail shirt, called a byrine. This mail shirt would ... view book

I wrote 162 days ago

Okay so I like the era and the war torn environment, however the layout of the whole thing is slightly off-putting (sorry!) but I’m pretty sure you could change that if you wanted to. I like the opening sentence/paragraph thing (it is a really confusing layout) and the imagery of fire is a powerful ... view book

I wrote 172 days ago

CWOG review Love the interesting and fast paced beginning-good way of grabbing any reader’s attention, the sudden switch makes sure we get enough of the character and don’t become numb to the action. The hint of Nate’s pain at both his past and his love for Kay makes me instantly empathetic of hi... view book

I wrote 218 days ago

Chapter One Review Good start, interesting but not over the top. Love the ‘mad artist’ comment. The context is interestingly hard to determine, evidently a while ago (with the reference to an arranged marriage and the inclusion of wolves) but impossible to tell exactly when, which I like! Love the ... view book

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