The story is written in a style that flows well without stumbling. For chick lit, I prefer your narrators voice to the usual handbags and Gucci shoes at fifty paces type of read. Lydia is easy to empathize with from the get go. With the amount of divorces in the world, there are many women who w... view book

Still reading, but read enough to back. Will give a more in-depth comment when I am further in. Don't like.... brute will kicks in even harder..... it sounds clunky. I'd delete those words at leave it at. Survival mode takes over. Every ounce of strength directs to his thighs. Shorter sen... view book

Sly, well you’ve done it again, another damn good book. I think you know it doesn’t need much tweaking, making it difficult not to blow smoke up your ass. Anyway, here goes for what it’s worth. I’m sure you’ll know if the following is worth considering. Not a fan or the use of the three ‘wh... view book

For me, the story rolls much better now. The only thing I would pay attention to next is the end of the chapters. I personally would try to work out some hooks. Chapter 1 finishes on a para that basically leaves no suspense, although the aircraft creates a good mystery in itself. For me there is no ... view book

CLAW REVIEW. Chapter 2 At The Races I’ve got to start by saying that the overall premise and your writing of this chapter is great, and having waded my way through to the end, it left me with some sense of satisfaction. It is only the crafting I would take issue with, but I have to say it is o... view book