I learnt this the hard way. Books that begin with people in bed, or waking up or getting into it hardly gets an agent or a publisher interested. You might try another opening, something different than what you have. since this is a work in progress that can easily be fixed. I will read on and let yo... view book

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This is clean work. It is too clean actually, just like catherine in your book. this is so digestible, so easy to read. i just breezed through your first chapter with its three divisions with ease. you said it took two years to write this? i think it did. this is good work. view book