Kenneth, I love your style and the descriptions put us right in the spot. I think this is possibly the first novel written about the immediate aftermath of the Japanese surrender and how realistic it is. You described my jungle descriptions as good but yours give us the smell and the moment. Well D... view book

Hi, Maeve, I found time at last to get around to reading your book and I'm glad I did. I see from previous comments that all the superlatives have been used so I won't bore you with them except to say - It's jolly damned brilliant! You say GBH had ambience. You should know as your book has it in sp... view book

Good morning Gail, I've taken a look at your book as you requested and I must say that I'm impressed. Your history as a writer shows and there is very little you need to do to impress H&C. Like most modern authors especially those on Authonomy, me included, there is a tendency to over describe like ... view book

Well, Scott, as you requested I've looked at your first chapter and this is what I recommend. Firstly, although not my genre it is an interesting concept and will go down well with all sci-fi fans, however. There's always a - However. First line - Describe the projectile early. Not just any old bu... view book

Hi, Janet, I've just found the time to read through some of my WL and I must say as an oldie Western addict (I loved the SUDDEN books by Oliver Strange) this really caught my fancy. There are one or two minor things that you could do while you're scrabbling to the top table and that is - look for u... view book