Hi Rick, Well, you certainly have the premise for a unique book, here:) While the story is interesting, I fear it may lose readers because of a trap most of us fall into from time to time - the dreaded "telling versus showing". You tend to tell the reader everything rather than let them experie... view book

Rick, I don't feel qualifed to tell you how to write. Each writer develops their own unique style. What I focus on when I read is the story and this one is truly delightful. I think it appeals to adults as well as young adults and I sincerely hope it finds a publishing home. It's a book tha... view book

I just realized that I'd read this before and loved it. Just not sure if I said this.... Bravo and BACKED:) Cheers, Ci view book

Oh wow! I how truly evil Pricilla is!! Well written, action packed and a "can't put it down" book for sure. Would buy this in a second!! Bravo and BACKED:) Cheers, Ci view book

WOW! I love it. Strong, passionate writing with great description ,a strong and distinctive narrative voice and a story that has POW! I smell a bestseller:) Bravo and BACKED!! Cheers, Ci view book