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hordak1972

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first registered 19.06.10

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Hello folks. I am Terrill Davis and I consider myself to be a writer. I just hope that when people review what I post, they can agree with me, or even better say that I am a good one. I have somewhat passed the arena of friends and family, they say I'm good. I just hope it's not that they didn;t have the heart to tell me I'm horrible. Hopefully, if I'm horrible you good people will tell me and I will do my best to do better.

I am here out of respect for my craft. This site has alot to offer and I have alot to learn. I want people to read my work and give their honest opinion, regardless if it may hurt, and I in turn will do the same for others. We are all here because we want to be writers, we want to be discovered, we want to tell a story.

Smile folks, listen, learn, and share. But most importantly have fun folks. Thx.

Currently looking for representation!
Can be contacted by Email at: tldavisletters2@yahoo.com or tldavisletters@gmail.com

favourite books

The Holy Bible
On Writing, Stephen King
The Exercist by William Peter Blatty
Icon by Fredrick Foresythe
The Shining by Stephen King (I read and like alot of his books)
The 21 irrefutable laws of leadership by John C. Maxwell

my websites

http://www.dailybrewconnection.com    

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my books

Mile Marker

Terrill L Davis

Highway 190, a road the law less traveled. Hitch hikers delight, a serial killer, watch who you pick up or who picks you up.


Matt Harper is a plumber in his early fifties trying to get done with work early for his anniversary. Clay Stevens, is a troubled lad in his late twenties walking down highway 190 with a large dufflebag on his back. Sargent Franklin Todd, Texas State Trooper, is hoping for a normal routine patrol route on highway 190 when he comes across an abandoned red Pontiac Sunbird. The local news station reports that a young blonde Sarah Wallace has been missing for over a week. Edward Jenkins and his cousin are looking to score a drug dealers stash hid in the woods off of highway 190. Sargent Todd takes interest in the two to see if it’s their car out here. Instead of finding them he finds a dead body. Sarah Wallace was last seen in her red Pontiac Sunbird.

 

Angel

Terrill L. Davis

Denied Heaven, Thomas finds a way to earn his wings. His spirit will serve his killer. But in reality, his killer will serve Thomas’ purpose.


“If you could rate the happiness in your life on a scale of one to ten, what would it be?”
This question will haunt Kyle Anderson, a racist drug addict, for the rest of his life after murdering Thomas Williams.
Thomas’ spirit has been linked to Kyle’s as an attempt to earn his wings. His mission is only fulfilled when Kyle’s happiness level is at ten.
Thomas begins his mission by helping Kyle get off drugs. Thomas will distort the evidence causing a mistrial getting Kyle off for murder. He spends the next fifteen years with Kyle constantly asking the question and making improvements in his life and raising his rate.
Kyle sued the city of Youngstown for a decently large amount. He will meet a woman, easy on the eyes, and hard for him to resist. In time she will become his wife and give birth to a daughter and three sons. His happiness level is now ten.
In a bizarre event, his two year old son gets out the house and is attacked by a dog. Thomas then kills the boy. His reason was an act of mercy, so he says. Now his other children are in danger.

 

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Emma.L.H. wrote 23 hours ago

Thank you very much for the backing, it's much appreciated :-) x

BeeJoy wrote 1 day ago

Hello. How are you? I would appreciate to switch comments and feedbac....

Dean Lombardo wrote 1 day ago

Hi Terrill, I want to thank you for backing Space Games off and on. I....

Maevesleibhin wrote 19 days ago

Dear Terrill, I am very happy for Jessica. The Library of Living is ....

Brian G Chambers wrote 24 days ago

Hi Terrill I thought since it is my birthday month (May) I would con....

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I wrote 291 days ago

Great story I must say. Excellent reason you are in the top 100 (78 as I write this .) The main thing I will tell you is to clean up your chapters as soon as possible. I say that because so many authors from this site get published or get offers and I've had a few pass on me due to my errors stil... view book

I wrote 300 days ago

Compelling story. Glad to see it moving up in the ranks. But if you are truly passionate about getting your project to succeed, you need to clean it up. Your grammar seemed fine, your problems are structural. You have some run on sentences and your paragraphs are too long. Your first paragraph... view book

I wrote 301 days ago

You do have an interesting story. Sad part, in this business that's really not enough. I'm not saying that everything that I write is golden, I just want to give you a critique you can use to improve your writing skills. You already been given enough motivational advice. OK, as far as the wri... view book

I wrote 409 days ago

Ah Dean this one is nice. Comical, loved the way you set this up. Being honest, I had no Idea it was about a game show in space. I know it's in the title but I have the tendoncy to be an idiot, lol. Come May I need to make room for this on my shelf. Great work! view book

I wrote 436 days ago

Hello, sorry I took so long to finish thie review, but I am ready to post my comments. I will say you have a way with words, the sad part it could be too much and may hinder you from getting a book deal. the first chapter has three short stories and you use a lot of metaphors, metaphors are good, ... view book

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