Julie, There is something effortless in your writing. The flow, plotting and dialogue are all very smooth and polished. Love the story line, the intrigue and your characters. Although Ellie feels as though she's ordinary, she isn't. There's humour in her characterisation, which is endearing. I li... view book

Club Agatha critique Chapter 2- Jack is really developing as a character in this chapter. We start to discover there's more to him that the initial impression. I like the anti-hero take on Jack, it makes him more interesting. A good guy that can do bad things. I say you've lived in his head for... view book

Club Agatha Critique - Chapter 1 As a reader we are drawn directly into the action and intrigue. Descriptions of Malcom's fear and flight are very well portrayed and written. I think you have captured the essence of the panic and tension of Malcolm's attempts to escape. He is a quick, intell... view book

Club Agatha Critique This chapter has a lighter feel as we are introduced to your characters, all of whom are very well developed. I feel like you have spent a lot of time with them. They aren't perfect, but there is a wonderful balance of making them a little flawed too. Chris seems to have a go... view book

Club Agatha Critique, Ch 1 & 2- This is an intriguing and very well written mystery. You have some really lovely descriptions, which give the book a haunting atmosphere and there is certainly a sense of misery with the incessant rain. The prologue and opening chapters bring the reader directly i... view book